Balanced evaluation

Read this.

Maybe this is for public consumption but my hair always stand on its ends when we completely whitewash the shortcomings. When I was in PICA, it was the same. One would think that since its an internal evaluation we would be best served by some honesty at least. Where our shortcomings are, how we can improve for the next event etc. But this was never done.

So we whitewash to the public and we whitewash even to ourselves. Where would that take us say 30 years from now?

How would you have written the article?